【原创诗歌】世界的格局 [复制链接]

     【草堂诗歌】世界的格局


             世界啊
             并不是高不可攀
             就像
             古老经久的诗歌
             老少皆吟
             流芳千古

             世界啊
             从浑沌不开
             到七大洲四大洋
             从单一的细菌
             到高级的类人猿
             从恐龙的灭绝
             到人类的顽强生长
             从归隅一角
             到跋涉于地球的
             各个家园
             从十几亿年的生命进化
             到十几万年的
             人类逐渐演化
             人终于凭借智慧
             主宰地球

             人类的历史
             就是世界的历史
             就是地球
             这个大家园的历史

             人类啊
             酸甜与苦辣
             贪婪与无私
             禅让与*
             战争与和平
             繁荣与没落
             成功与失败
             造就了这个
             世界的格局
             地球这个大家园
             纷繁奇变的格局

              人类啊
              世界真因您
              的烂漫
              而精彩
      
                                   文/亚细亚
                                                   2012年4月4日
            
thatched cottage poetry  the pattern of the world
world
And not unattainable
as
Ancient long poems
Sing for young and old
Remain historic
world
Don't open from chaos
To the seven continents four oceans
From a single bacterium
To senior the apes
From the extinction of the dinosaurs
The indomitable growth to humans
From one corner to corner of
To trek to the earth
Each home
More than years of evolution from life
To several hundred thousand years
Human evolution gradually
People finally with wisdom
Dominated the planet
The history of human
Is the history of the world
Is the earth
The big home history
Human ah
Sweet and sour and bitter
Greed and selfless
ChanRang with *
War and peace
Prosperity and decline
Success and failure
Made the
The pattern of the world
The earth this big home
The numerous odd change pattern
Human ah
The world is true for you
's grace
And wonderful
Wen/Asia
On April 4, 2012

人类主宰世界，世界受伤了

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人类啊
              世界真因您
              的烂漫
              而精彩
世界啊
              人类真因他
              的野蛮
              而黯淡

楼主你受累了！

              
              人类啊！
               世界啊！
               何去何从？

楼主也许可以开辟诗歌的另一片天地。