七律三首 [复制链接]

    转帖老干部段兴缘七律三首

                                                         打     工      写    真  

                                                                     一

                                            过完年假整行装     背井离乡有感伤
                                            进厂租房开伙食     剪鞋裁布做衣裳
                                            加班苦干忙工务     节省花销积孔方
                                            血汗挣来钱数万     一家团聚喜洋洋

                                                                     二


                                            满月乳头强扯脱      婴孩奶奶抱怀啼
                                            幼儿园里呆玩耍      义教年间乐不疲
                                            五日修行应努力      三轮接送莫迟疑
                                             暑期车托爹妈处      短暂温馨又别离


                                                                       三


                                            中青男女打工谋      留守家乡尽老头
                                            接送儿童忙早晚      耕耘田地累栽收
                                            校园门口人车挤      麻将桌边婴幼纠
                                            待到年关传喜讯      生财有道乐无忧

沙发，写得很贴切……

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